Re: After "No Way Down" DRAFT
Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2014 5:37 am
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The only things I would change are the words "enough" and "troubles." Make it "trouble," and make the phrasing read, "well enough," and the line runs perfectly smooth.
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Isaac pressed his palms together, looking up at Catherine. He said, "Would you tell him that Lucy needs a friend right now? One she already trusts. And tell him a friend of Jason Walker needs some answers...if I'm gonna be much help in the days ahead." Calm as can be, he concluded, "Word on the street says there's a storm brewing. And I think it's aimed in Vincent's direction."
The only things I would change are the words "enough" and "troubles." Make it "trouble," and make the phrasing read, "well enough," and the line runs perfectly smooth.
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Isaac pressed his palms together, looking up at Catherine. He said, "Would you tell him that Lucy needs a friend right now? One she already trusts. And tell him a friend of Jason Walker needs some answers...if I'm gonna be much help in the days ahead." Calm as can be, he concluded, "Word on the street says there's a storm brewing. And I think it's aimed in Vincent's direction."